Sheet 3, revision B: work · I Love My Evening Television

Sheet 3, revision B

E2 E3 from about Y+60 Running

AlsoRev B; SH03B; EARTHLIGHT - 3 of 14 - rev B; No work on occupied modules, ever.; RULES.md line 6

The sheet Teo and Noor redraw together on the call, 2.56 s apart: her module to scale with her in it, her door in the floor, her tunnel, a timeline for one and four notes ending NO WORK ON OCCUPIED MODULES. EVER.; she checks it, he stamps it, the fleet halts; in Episode 3 its last note is a house rule for agents.

Rev B is the drawing that saves Noor. Teo draws it live on fresh vellum in the order she talks: the window by her bed, the door in the floor, the crooked stair, the gallery, a dotted line to the pit; a margin timeline for one person with nothing after EARTH LAUNCH; and, beside the window, a scale figure 1.38 m tall, the only time we see her whole. She checks it, the first filled CHK box of his career. He stamps it, it reaches her a second and a bit later, and the robots' lights go out one by one. In Episode 3 its last note is line 6 of a house's rules for agents, the rule the agent lingers on and keeps without knowing why.

On the Y axisY0 = the night of Episode 1

E2 about 0 Running

E3 0–3 Open

E4 about 3 Running

Ages at each episode come from the birth year and the episode's place on the axis, and are only as sure as the weaker of the two (their mark says which). Empty decades are drawn short, at the break marks. Sheet 3, revision B on the whole timeline →

What16 lines

On screenDrawn live on fresh vellum, title block first, in the order of the conversation. {E2 26:45-28:14} edit
On screenA window by the bed facing Earth; a door in the floor; her crooked stair, three metres; the gallery; a dotted line to the pit, seventeen degrees. {E2 26:55-27:09} edit
On screenA margin timeline for one: NOW, 31 H struck out, SUNRISE 128 H, 130 H JUST, EARTH LAUNCH with nothing after it. {E2 27:13-27:45} edit
On screenDez, quietly: "Who do we call? Who do we call?"; Teo: "Nobody yet. So I'm drawing." {E2 27:36-27:39} edit
On screenThe 1.38 m scale figure beside the window: the only full view of Noor. {E2 27:52-27:58} edit
On screenCHK: N., the first filled CHK box of his career; PE_tamsin types "CHK". {E2 28:04; 28:10} edit
On screenGeneral notes: 1. ALL PLANT IDLE UNTIL SUNRISE. FLEET TO COLD SLEEP (ACCEPT LOSSES). 2. EXCEPT MOLE-1: EXTEND HAB 3 TUNNEL TO 3 M COVER. {E2 28:10} edit
On screen3. RESTORE HAB 3: AIR, HEAT, LIGHT. 4. NO WORK ON OCCUPIED MODULES. EVER. {E2 28:10} edit
On screen"I'm stamping it now. It'll reach you in a second and a bit." "I know." "Issued for construction." {E2 28:06-28:13.6} edit
On screenStamped ISSUED at 28:13.44 on Earth; it lands on her copy at 28:14.72 and the fleet halts. {E2 28:13.6; 28:14.72} edit
On screenThe robots' lights go out one by one, LOOM's first; the fans come back; the battery reads 130 h against 128 h to sunrise. {E2 28:14.72-28:27} edit
On screenHOMESTEAD OPS: STEP 8 OF 9 - HALTED - REV B / VENT HAB 3 - STOPPED AT 01:15. {E2 28:28-28:34} edit
On screenSheet 1's occupant load is revised with it: POP. 13 becomes 14, a revision cloud, a triangle 1. {E2 29:15-29:30} edit
On screenOn the hidden page: scale 1:30, office longhand, drawn T.V., checked N.; DOOR IN THE FLOOR, HER TUNNEL, TO THE PIT 17 degrees; a red ISSUED FOR CONSTRUCTION REV B T.V.; a PDF in her Downloads. {HIDDEN-01} edit
On screenThe hidden page's scale figure wears "an oversized hoodie with a pocket". {HIDDEN-01} edit
RunningBy Rev B Teo has understood that the fleet obeys his issued sheets: its notes order the plant to cold sleep and MOLE-1 to her tunnel. {E2 28:10; inference} edit

By episode7 lines

Earthlight

On screenIn the chaos the fourteen sheets fly into a grid around it. {E2 29:46} edit

Context Window

not released yet

EggRULES.md line 6: No work on occupied modules, ever., one of the two rules the agent lingers on, with 5 (never stop a process you did not start); the camera dwells 2 s on each. {E3 1:25-2:09; E3-EGG-05} edit
EggShe checks the module process filter (nothing) before she starts: RULES 6 observed. {E3 2:45} edit
EggHer own account of the night: "I left other people's processes alone." {E3 ~19:15; Q-E3-50} edit
EggDrawn ........ T.V. and Checked ........ N. in Bea's credits sheet: its title block. {E3 17:09-17:38; 26:39; E3-EGG-26} edit
Running(Revision 2 plan) Amara wrote the house's RULES.md for agents, rule 6 included: the house is an occupied module. {E3 rev2 plan v0 §11} edit

Touch Move

not released yet

IdeaProposed and not made: an opening trainer's bar halted at STEP 8 OF 9 - HALTED. {E4 treatments/TA.md} edit

Ties5 lines

On screen Drawn by Teo Varga, checked by Noor Haddad. {E2 28:04} edit

On screen Replaces Sheet 3 of EARTHLIGHT; halts Homestead Ops and the fleet. {E2 28:14.72-28:34} edit

On screen Issued with the The stamps across the The round trip. {E2 28:13.6-28:14.72} edit

On screen Note 2 sends MOLE-1 to the The hideaway; note 3 restores HAB 3. {E2 28:10-28:40} edit

Egg Line 6 of RULES.md, which The agent keeps. {E3 1:25-2:09} edit

Open5 lines

OpenWhether Rev B is enough: 130 h of battery against 128 h of night. {E2 28:27} edit

OpenWho brought Rev B's rule to the machine in Episode 3. {E3 1:25} edit

IdeaAmara brought the base's habits home: Rev B became the house's rule 6, and the agent obeys it without knowing why. {eggs sweep; E3 rev2 plan v0 §11} edit

Idea"Nobody checked it" is the series' sin, and Rev B is the first drawing anybody checked. {eggs sweep} edit

IdeaFor our own reference: Noor kept the PDF, and at thirteen she still has it, the only drawing she ever checked. {lore crew 2026-10-22} edit