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- SteelThe concept: a child on a moon base watches a "moon city planner" on Earth drawing blueprints for colonising the Moon on her iPad; he makes it for people on Earth, never intending it to be seen from the base. {Aaron E2 brief 2026-10-12} edit
- SteelHe talks calmly and matter-of-factly about every risk, unintentionally brutal to the kid; when he describes her equipment she looks up and sees it failing; when he names planned structures she looks out and sees robots building them. {Aaron E2 brief 2026-10-12} edit
- SteelShe is mostly quiet, unheard for the first ten minutes, and phones in near the end. {Aaron E2 brief 2026-10-12} edit
- On screenTeo Varga goes live as longhand on Lantern and re-issues his whole Moon-city drawing set, EARTHLIGHT, as Rev C: "Tonight, the whole set again, properly." {E2 00:35} edit
- On screenFrom 00:10 the picture is her copy of the stream; at the first ISSUED stamp it pulls back: an iPad on the Moon, the scratch is a crack, small taped hands. {E2 03:31} edit
- On screenEach sheet he stamps ISSUED wakes a robot outside her window in the same frame: MOLE-1 at Sheet 2, DRAY at Sheet 4. {E2 03:31; 08:20} edit
- On screenNoor Haddad types
the moonwhen he asks where everyone is watching from; he laughs through his nose: "...Somebody's always on the moon." {E2 04:17} edit - On screenHer base app says HAB 3 is STORAGE with OCCUPANCY 0, the manifest is 13 ADULTS - PERSONAL EFFECTS (1), and she must not use public channels. {E2 06:56-07:01} edit
- On screenThirteen of the dorm's fourteen bunks are stripped; thirteen mugs and one small cup wait on a shelf; a dispenser greets her by her mother's name. {E2 08:53-09:42} edit
- On screenA cough at 10:21 is the first sound of her; her battery wall gives 74 h to empty against 128 h to sunrise. {E2 10:21; 11:06} edit
- On screenHer first words come through the stream's robot voice (Lantern's TTS), $1: "how long is the night where you are". "Here? About eight hours tonight. Where we're building... three hundred and fifty-four." {E2 11:37-11:50} edit
- On screenLow Power Mode drops her copy to audio only and the Moon arrives as seven damaged Victorian scientific plates while his calm voice continues. {E2 14:55-16:30} edit
- On screenHis white model and the real dark base are flown on one camera path; an x-ray finds a tunnel under HAB 3 that is on no sheet. {E2 17:10-17:46} edit
- On screenHe decides phase one was his mistake; she types
please dont void sheet 3andplease; the chat cheersVOID IT KING; he stamps Sheet 3 VOID. {E2 19:16-19:58.72} edit - On screenAt 20:00 the stream peels off her screen and every robot turns its lights onto her window. {E2 20:00} edit
- On screenOn her iPad (Noor's iPad) his calm voice reads out how a module is taken apart while the fleet does it to her home, step by step: PAWN leaves, The hum stops, the window cracks, a machine's eye looks in. {E2 20:04-21:58} edit
- On screenShe goes down to her tunnel (The hideaway), 3 m, "SAFE FROM THE SUN", and plays the base's recruitment song, whispering its echoes one round trip behind. {E2 22:05-25:02} edit
- On screenHer iPad dies at 5%; she charges it from her suit, climbs for signal and, against the standing order, calls the stream. {E2 25:02-25:20} edit
- On screenAcross 2.56-second silences (The round trip) she tells him "I live in it." and "That was eleven days ago." {E2 25:42; 26:31} edit
- On screenTogether they redraw Sheet 3 as Sheet 3, revision B: her window, her door in the floor, a timeline for one, her figure to scale (1.38 m), CHK: N., and the note NO WORK ON OCCUPIED MODULES. EVER. {E2 26:45-28:14} edit
- On screenRev B lands; the robots' lights go out one by one, the fans come back, the battery reads 130 h against 128 h to sunrise. {E2 28:14.72-28:27} edit
- On screenA flyby: one red beacon blink 62 km away, never remarked on; then POP. 13 becomes 14 on Sheet 1. {E2 28:58; 29:15-29:30} edit
- On screenThirty seconds of everything at once; black; "Goodnight." and, 1.28 s later from her iPad, "Good-". {E2 29:30-30:00} edit
- On screenIn the end black, after 1.28 s of silence, a heartbeat slows over the life-support hum. {E2 30:01-30:20} edit
- RunningNobody finds out if it is enough: the crew, the blink, FINCH's lamp, the white suit and who sends "dinner, noor" stay unanswered by design. {E2 MASTER_TREATMENT §0.2} edit
- RunningUnder Aaron's later decision (Rosie is Noor's grandmother),
grandma_rosiesits in the chat of the stream her granddaughter lives by, on the night she calls in; nobody on screen connects them. {E2 27:51.6; Aaron 2026-10-22} edit

